While Sinéad’s part of story starts off with the story itself, right away, Michael and Blood’s part of story is more of a gradual easing into their lives and the way they live, the way they feel, the way they perceive the world around them.
This snippet is from chapter 3, where we meet other people in the two men’s life. I enjoyed writing this chapter because, while in chapter one they appear more like the kind of the hero, here they appear in their everyday life, which gave me room to portray different aspects of their personalities.
Hope you enjoy it.
“So the job was gone,” Susie said without raising her gaze from the food she was preparing.
Blood sighed, dropped his gaze one moment, bear-hugged her from behind and rocked her. She let him do it, never raising her head or pausing in her work, and Michael could read her mind on her face: if they had the job, that would be the first thing Blood would tell her.
“Don’t worry, babe. We’ll find one.” Blood rested his chin on her shoulder.
She didn’t look up, she didn’t stop chopping away. “I’m not worried. I was just thinking.” She gathered the vegetables on the blade of the chopper and dropped them in the pan, unsettling the oil to a hard fry.
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